Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Kansas Gothic (The first 40 pages)


The feedback has been very good on the first 40 pages. I'm hoping this screenplay isn't any longer than 90 pages.. *fingers crossed*

Here's Gooding's response via email:

1- as long as keep the drag queens in all will go well. 

2- "I hope you are at peace"  great fucken line

3- umbrellas are scary touch

4- this just feels tighter- more composite....

5- I love the two things converging- the show getting the dirt man vision and him out there destroying things- love it-  build the tension homo

6- you must give me that funk theme for shirley thunda...mother fucka

7- just breathe and be myself...damn-  therapy is some funny shit aint it!  fucken wounded gazelle...

8- the song is touching

9- I love where you left off....


And, on we go.....


-wade.

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